So I still wrote stuff in the detective's diary.
But I feel like I'm losing the pacing..
Want to know if anyone who read it feels like the story is clunky sometimes..
I might do some rework after finishing the writing process.
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Posted by ZombieGhost - February 22nd, 2024
So I still wrote stuff in the detective's diary.
But I feel like I'm losing the pacing..
Want to know if anyone who read it feels like the story is clunky sometimes..
I might do some rework after finishing the writing process.